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I hate you
because I love you
I hate you
because you were my friend
I hate you
because I trusted you
I hate you
because you left
I hate myself
For letting you go
notice how 'love' isnt in past tence
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Raizen22 Jun 21, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
i have a poem similar to this.
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WarriorPoetAdam Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
like it reminds me of one of mine lol [link]
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DinosurGirl Nov 7, 2012  Student Writer
i knows how u feels
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:iconpeacethroughpower:
[link] Sion: "I hate you because you crawl within my head as she does, but your presence holds no thoughts, no teachings, you are just… there, unspoken. I hate you because you are beautiful to me. And in that weakness lies death."

Very nicely done, I like it and it speaks the truth of the Heart. :nod:
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:iconfoxywolves:
i like it :) good repetition and use of words man
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xLeah7x Oct 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
True words--I know how this feels. Going through it now and it sucks.
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DogTierJade Oct 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
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Shasta-Rose Oct 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Going through that, too. Thank you for expressing this. Also your comment that "love isn't past tense" is so true.
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hevana Oct 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thanks and it really sucks to hate someone you love
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Shasta-Rose Oct 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It really is... a hard juxtaposition of emotions I have problems dealing with, even though it's been a long time. Hoping for the best for you.
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